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Post by Blackhorse on Aug 9, 2004 8:41:44 GMT -5
Hmmm... I was ill yesterday and lying down for much of the day, and I plenty of time to think. So I got some paper and wrote a poem. It's sort of weird, and isn't really that exciting - lol. It's meant to be from the point of view of Draco Malfoy. I feel that Draco is cautious of allowing other people to get close to him - it shows in the books - and he is jealous, aggressive and bitter, but not necessarily a bad person. I tried to bring that across in the poem. Anyway... here tis. Hope you like. ~ What are you looking at? You looking at me? Step right up, What do you see? I'm sarcastic, I'm cruel, I'm smart and I'm cool I won't let you near me I won't let you touch Don't smile at me, I don't make friends much I'm not friendly, I'm cold, And I don't fit the mould, But don't judge me like that, And don't believe all you're told. ~ Hmmm... its' bad... but it was fun to write. And yea, I know the rhyming pattern is weird...please review if ya have a spare moment
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Raindragon
Professor
Ron, stop looking so worried!
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Post by Raindragon on Aug 9, 2004 8:53:09 GMT -5
Actually it was pretty good I like the rhythm, it's just fun to read and interesting
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Post by Blackhorse on Aug 9, 2004 9:01:30 GMT -5
Did you think it sounded like Draco?
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Raindragon
Professor
Ron, stop looking so worried!
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Post by Raindragon on Aug 9, 2004 9:07:59 GMT -5
Yeah, I could imagine him saying that if he spoke in poetry lol
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Post by Blackhorse on Aug 9, 2004 9:39:02 GMT -5
lol, that would be bizzare thanks
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Gala
Student
Hermione Rocks!
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Post by Gala on Aug 9, 2004 11:40:55 GMT -5
i think it's cool! very well written.
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Post by Blackhorse on Aug 9, 2004 12:33:51 GMT -5
Thanks Gala!
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Post by Bloodrose on Aug 9, 2004 18:28:22 GMT -5
I take it you enjoy getting in this boys' head?
I particularly like the last line, BTW.
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Post by Blackhorse on Aug 10, 2004 3:39:49 GMT -5
Thanks, DS.
Yes, I do indeed. He is an extremely interesting character, with a lot of scope in terms of fanfic and such.
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