Thoughts of a Malfoy

[Blackhorse]

Hmmm...

I was ill yesterday and lying down for much of the day, and I plenty of time to think. So I got some paper and wrote a poem. It's sort of weird, and isn't really that exciting - lol. It's meant to be from the point of view of Draco Malfoy. I feel that Draco is cautious of allowing other people to get close to him - it shows in the books - and he is jealous, aggressive and bitter, but not necessarily a bad person. I tried to bring that across in the poem.

Anyway... here tis. Hope you like.


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What are you looking at?
You looking at me?
Step right up,
What do you see?
I'm sarcastic,
I'm cruel,
I'm smart and I'm cool
I won't let you near me
I won't let you touch
Don't smile at me,
I don't make friends much
I'm not friendly, I'm cold,
And I don't fit the mould,
But don't judge me like that,
And don't believe all you're told.



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Hmmm... its' bad... but it was fun to write. And yea, I know the rhyming pattern is weird...please review if ya have a spare moment

[Raindragon]

Actually it was pretty good I like the rhythm, it's just fun to read and interesting

[Blackhorse]

Did you think it sounded like Draco?

[Raindragon]

Yeah, I could imagine him saying that if he spoke in poetry lol

[Blackhorse]

lol, that would be bizzare thanks

[Gala]

i think it's cool! very well written.

[Blackhorse]

Thanks Gala!

[Bloodrose]

I take it you enjoy getting in this boys' head?

I particularly like the last line, BTW.

[Blackhorse]

Thanks, DS.

Yes, I do indeed. He is an extremely interesting character, with a lot of scope in terms of fanfic and such.